Potential major fail... If all you want is a "cool cage" for HPDE days, that'll be fine, since no cage is actually required. If, OTOH, you plan on getting into a race group at a later date, you'd have to cut it all out and start over again. Decision is yours to make, but I know which way I would lean.
Basic NASA cage specs, as applicable to a "standard" S197 build:
1.75" x 0.120" wall mild steel DOM or seamless tubing for all required tubes, no ERW allowed. Optional tubes may be any size desired... Only the required are listed below.
No bend may be tighter than 4x the cage tubing diameter, all welds must be 360* with full penetration. No gaps, no skips, period. And yes, they check.
Main hoop: Max 4 bends, 180* +/-10*, full width of the interior, and as close to the roof line as is practicable. Must have diagonal and harness bars in plane of the hoop
Rear stays: No bends, attach as close as possible to the top of the main hoop, 75-105* included angle in plan view (from the top: perpendicular to the main hoop +/-15*), may land on shock towers or suspension pickup points.
Forward hoops: Extend from the main hoop and follow the contour of the roof and A-pillar, extending down to the floor, max 4 bends. A windshield bar must connect the two as close to the roofline as is practicable. Dash bar is optional, but I would recommend it. Good place to hang the column from, also great place to mount the center net attachment point.
Door bars: At least two bars on the driver's side, one tube on the passenger. If you do NASCAR door bars (which I recommend!), you may then gut the doors completely. Otherwise you must retain all the stock sheetmetal.
Mounting pads: Min 2", max 12" on a side, 100 in(sq) max, 9 in(sq) min, 0.080" thick minimum, and they may extend onto vertical surfaces.
I think you can see that most NHRA/IHRA cages will not pass tech. Your tubing, for example, while plenty thick, is too small in diameter, and is probably ERW tubing. IIRC, the NHRA/IHRA growth path for cages creates a cocoon around the driver's seat, where as the road-race cages try to bullet-proof the entire greenhouse. Also, IIRC, NHRA/IHRA specifically dis-allow the diagonal in the main hoop.
If you want to cage the car, do it right. If you want to sell it, it'll be a lot tougher when it's not legal for NASA (and I think SCCA is the same basic spec) competition. As I said, do what you want, but personally, I would start with a clean sheet of paper and have the NASA CCR section 15.6 sitting right in front of me the whole time. When I did my cage, I worked with the builders on the design, CCR in hand, and it passed tech first time through, with no problem but compliments on the workmanship.